A reformulation of the ‘Footprints in the Sand‘ poem as a limerick:
There was a man who, at low tideWould walk with the Lord by his sideJesus said “Now look back;You’ll see one set of tracks.That’s when you got a piggy-back ride.”{source}
Great to see it distilled down but still retaining its meaning. Reminded me of this Savage Chickens cartoon about brevity.